Okay, finally, I’m here. I’m going to talk about the writing. I think this writing, rather than being horrible or the worst thing ever written by a human being, is a classic case of ‘too many cooks spoil the broth’. When I finished the film and the credits scrolled by I wasn’t surprised to learn that there had been four writers behind it. Because, unlike other people who read it as AI, I read it completely as a film written by many different writers—each with their own ideas, each with their own wants and needs and each getting carried away with their ideas even if they clashed with each other.
Tag: writing
An Archaic Modern Play: Play On, Act 4, Scene 3
CHARACTERS IN THIS SCENE: LIA- Princess of Albion. KENT- Son of the Duke of Kent, a suitor for the Princess of Albion. Bors’ Castle kitchen Enter Lia and Kent Kent: Are you sure you wish to be here, Princess? It does not seem a place for somebody as highly appreciated as you. Lia: I am… Continue reading An Archaic Modern Play: Play On, Act 4, Scene 3
An Archaic Modern Play: Play On, Act 4, Scene 1
CHARACTERS IN SCENE: ARMENIA: Princess of Medi, disguised as the servant Arthur. WILSON: An Independent Investigator from France, investigating the allegations against the Kingdom of Medi by the Kingdom of Albion. KNIGHT 1: A Knight of Medi. KNIGHT 2: A Knight of Medi To. Medi’s Palace Enter Armenia Armenia: Ah, what foolish games we play… Continue reading An Archaic Modern Play: Play On, Act 4, Scene 1
A Gift At Halloween (A Short Story)
My Grandma had always told me that our family had a gift. That no matter where we went we could see what most other people couldn’t. My Mum had made sure we didn’t visit Grandma too often. After the one time she’d taken me on a ‘holiday’ to the local graveyard to go and see her dead mother, and locked me inside the crypt, my Mum had vowed never to let me see her ever again.
The Literary Onion 